Tuesday, March 31, 2015

Rage Chapter 1

Rage: 
(Edited, not a wall of text <3)
 
  "A-Archer...! N-no...!!" "Kainzu, I'm sorry..." he picked up his blade, from the ash covered floor, a molten purple flame, surrounded the two, and at its center, a drachen. The two stood on a round platform in the middle of a cavern, above, jagged crystal hung, as the glow from them would fade, then re light. 

These crystals kept the room surprisingly well lit, all the while, a rift on the bottom of the cavern spun, the mechanism reacting to the glow,  the allagan masterpiece folding, and bending at the will of the surrounding Aether. 

At the mouth of the cave, far far above, an Allagan platform began to rise, sealing the fate of the two. There was no return, no, not until the bane of the dread lord is slain. 

The beast leapt from the floor, and spread its mechanical wings as it circled the two below, peering down at its new found prey. It let out a monstrous roar, the two in response covered there ears. 

Suddenly she struck, diving down, nearly hitting the floor beside them a gust of wind, as powerful as an explosion, hurled them towards the flames. "A-Archer...! I... I'm scared..!" He looked up at his older brother, as he coughed from the sudden burst of wind.

"Kainzu, calm down.. You know what I must do.." "A-archer p-please...!!" The taller man, patted his younger brothers head, ruffling his Miqo'te ears a bit, as a tear fell from his eye, he turned away, and began to walk towards the center of the arena. 

"Kainzu.." He paused looking back. "May the light of Pharos Sirius, ever guide you." "ARCHER NO!!" He screamed, as he sobbed trying to run towards his brother, until he tripped, falling to the floor, and landing on his stomach. "P-please!! You're the only family I have left!!" 

The dragon, with a thud, landed in front of the man. He peered into the beasts eyes, as it began to hover slightly off the ground, the wings creating small gusts of wind. He drew his blade, and readied his shield, the dragon began to conjure a flaming molten ball in its maw. 

Archer struck the sword into the ground, got on a knee, and began to pray, very quietly, to where only he could hear. The dragon continued to conjure more, and more aetherical flames, until it's maw was filled, with it's tail, it quickly pierced through the mans armor, stabbing into his mid section, blood slowly began to pour from the man's body, some of which splattered on his younger brother's face. 

Kainzu screamed, as he watched in horror, the beast spitting it's liquid hell at what once was his brother, instantly burning the body to ashes. All that remained was a sword. His sword. Kainzu, tears streaming down his cheeks, began to stand up. "You killed him!" He screamed. "You killed the only family I have left!" 

He gritted his teeth, and clenched his fist, taking a step closer. He looked to the blade, watching as it began to transform, bending, shifting, the sleek Allagan metal, began to form a spear. With one hand, he lifted it from the roasted ground, held it in both hands, and gazed at the dragon above.

 It screeched again, flying back into the air. In return, Kainzu pointed the spear at the circling beast, he held it firm in hand, bending his knees, he held his aim, he glared at the beast as it began to dive towards him. He held the newly formed spear in his hands, as it began to glow a calm blue, the dragon flew at full speed, but he did not move. 

At the moment her head was directly in front of him, he lunged his spear into the great beasts godly head. It screamed and roared in agony, the two being pushed to the edges of the fire, the Spurs on his boots began to skid, then finally broke off, he held his stance, he had not budged until they finally slid to a final halt. 

The Queen of Dragons, guardian of the coils, had died. He pulled the bloodied allagan spear from the beasts head, and latched it onto his back. He fell to his knees, and cried. Two men could be heard from a cavern. 

"Look! We've found them! Inform the commander!" One yelled, "Yessir!" He replied, suddenly Kainzu heard a familiar voice. "Kainzu...! Kainzu! Is that you!" "Ma'am,  please wait until we reach the floor." "W.... Wait.. Where's Archer..." The voice muttered. 

His vision began to grow blurry, then everything turned black. 

A few days passed, and Kainzu awoke above ground, in what looked to be a medic room. He tried to sit up, looking at his arm to notice an IV attached to it, he looked to his left, observing his surroundings, as any Miqo'te would do. He saw int he right corner of the pale room, he saw something that made him cringe, that brought tears straight to his eyes, he even screamed at seeing the sight of it. 

Doctors rushed in, as well as a familiar voice. "Kainzu! Are you alright?" A man rushed over, with hair as white as snow, a gripped Kainzu's hand. "Talk to me, what's wrong, it's ok.." He pointed weakly at the Allagan spear, in that instant the man yelled to the doctor's "Remove it, immediately!" 

One of the two ran over taking the spear and rushing out. His breathing slowed, as the male held his hand, he closed his eyes, laying back, then wiped the sweat from his forehead. "Better..?" He asked, looking down upon the bed panicked Miqo'te. He replied with a slow nod, and rested his eyes. "Rest easy.. We'll talk la-" he was cut off by Kainzu. 

"Take me to her..." He muttered. "You're in no state to move, I'm sorry, but I have to disapprove." He replied without hesitation. Ignoring the medics words he slowly began to stand from his bed. "I... Need... To see her.." He looked up, tears in his eyes, then stepped out of the tall bed, wearing nothing but very light, paper thin robe, only to cover his nakedness beneath. "Kainzu please." 

The medic stared into the stubborn child's eyes. "At... At least let me help you.." He put one of Kainzu's arms over his shoulder, and began to walk with him out the room. They started down the narrow black metal hall, step by step, they walked, on their way, and doctors that were on duty, stopped, and gave him a salute, he looked at them confused, confused as why they would salute a failure. 

The two left the hospital, the mechanical doors opening at their footsteps, he looked around, remembering how they recently took down the Garlean stronghold, and began excavation of Dalamud, and the binding coil, as they called it. It had been a year since they had taken it over, but only a few weeks ago, had they reached the Ragnarok Central Core, and also, where one man fell, in the name of science, and the preservation of Eorzea. 

"Lieutenant Halone!" He looked over at surrounding men, and woman, some clad in Allagan Armor, some in researcher uniforms. All at once, they put their arm behind their backs, and one over their heart. "A-at ease.." He replied to their salute weakly. "Where is Catherine." "In the Core sir." One replied. 

"W-why did you call me sir... Why are you all saluting me.. Archer.." He stopped. "A-archer is our leader..."  There was nothing but silence. A soldier walked up with a crate in hand. "Your armor sir.." She set the crate softly on the ground before him, and opened it. "Do you need any assistance..?" "No, I have some strength.." 

He removed his arm from the man's neck, then took off the robe, he grabbed the underwear in the crate, and weakly put them on, the soldiers holding their pose. He began to put his armor on. The medic only watched, waiting for him to finish. He put on next, his shorts, then grabbed out his armored thigh boots., they were straight black, with blue Aetherical veins in them, and on his heels, bladed spurs. 

He looked down into the crate, then grabbed out his doublet vest, then slid it on, the gray outline held the pure white in place. Lastly he grabbed his necklace, as well Allagan, with a Aetherical blue gem in the center. He looked back at the group, then began walking towards the lift back into the Ragnarok Central Core. He began to tap buttons on the control panel, as the soldier that had handed him his gear, and the medic followed. He slid the key card in the panel, and the lift began its decent. While the contraption continued downward, he stared at the panel, watching it, remembering that fateful morning. He turned around and looked to the two. 

"Sorry to be rude, but, what are your names?" He asked, his arms crossed. The medic spoke first. "Sol Animus, Origin, Ul'dah, Race, Miqo'te Seeker of the sun." "And your combat style?" "Darker magic than you'd expect." "And you.." He turned to the woman. "Raz Tyuna, Origin, Gridania, Race, Miqo'te Keeper of the moon. I specialize in the art of Lancing, more specifically, Dragoon" 

"I guess I should formally introduce myself.." He replied looking towards the two. "Kainzu Halone, Origin, Coerthas, Race, Miqo'te Keeper of the moon, and I specialize in duel wielding." 

The platform continued to lower, until it reached a patch of mirror crystals, he looked at his reflection, his fair skin, his black tail, and black pointed feline ears, he looked at the grey frosted tips of his hair, touching one in his left hand, he looked back at the other two, Sol, having snow white hair, and Raz having pitch black braids, both of the two hand pointed ears, only their tails differed. Raz having a slick, pointed tail, that would sway left to right, and Sol, who had a fluffed white tail, that swayed right to left. His tail, did not move, it stayed calm, resting itself almost. He turned around completely, as the mirror crystals rose above them, and as the platform reached its destination.

The three looked down at the battle field, and isolated pillar of land, in the middle of a cavern, the spinning core had now stopped, and a mechanical bridge had been formed, leading towards the center, scientist had already begun studying the Allagan beast, and its surroundings, until it came to a skidding halt at the edge of the platform. The three walked off, and directly to a stone in the middle of the bruised arena, and sitting on there knees next to it, was Catherine. 

"Archer..." She mumbled lightly, as Kainzu approached the her. She had light blonde hair, and light blue eyes, she wore a white lab coat, and black thy boots, with of course, a black mini skirt. She began to cry, but quickly wiped her eyes to cover her weakness. "Brother.." He looked down to the woman and the tombstone. "Your brother was a good, honest man... Even though you two had your disputes, and claimed you hated each other, I saw through it. I know you two cared most about each other, it was a bond no one could break.. We were scheduled to be married this month." 

She stopped. "Good things never last." She muttered standing up. "Give up this serious act Kainzu.." He relaxed his muscles and looked to the woman before him, he couldn't hold back any longer, he instantly burst into tears, running towards her, as she embraced him in a motherly hug, rubbing the back of his head, and scratching behind his ears, his tail swayed sadly, as he wrapped his arms around the woman's waist. "H-he's gone...!" He sobbed. 

"I'll never get to see him again.... I'll never get to build snow forts, or throw snowballs at each other, or make a pillow fort..." "Kainzu.. It's ok..." "But.." "Shh hun, everything will be fine. As long as we let the light of Pharos Sirius guide us." At that moment, he remembered his brothers last words, and felt relieved. As if his brother was there, hugging the two, a warmth filled the two's hearts, as a small smile formed on their faces. 

"May the light of Pharos Sirius ever guide you." Archers soft voice rang out in the pair's ears, he spoke one last time. "Do not give up, ever, let my death power you, let my Aetherical energy flow through your minds, and bodies. Let the light guide you, follow that light!" A burst of Aetherical matter erupted from the tombstone, making the room glow a bright blue. The two stood up, and dusted off their clothing. 

"Raz, fetch me my brothers weapon..." He looked to the other woman. "Please." She gave a quick nod, and began back to the lift. "Well then, while we wait, how about we head into the Ragnarok Core?" Catherine spoke up, as the lift began to move upwards. "Sure, I'd like to see what that beast was trying to protect." He muttered and began walking towards the new formed mechanical bridge. "I will await her Lt. Halone." Sol saluted, then waited by the lift, waiting for Raz's return. 

"Let's get going Catherine." he looked up to the taller woman, his ears perked up, a smile formed on his face. "As you wish!" She smiled back, then led the way across the mechanism. 

Guidelines

1-Compelling? Logic? Ethos logos pathos?
2- are they or their topic something worth connecting over?
3-are they able to take a big idea and simplify it?
4-What is your topic?
5-What drew you to it?
6-What are your goals?
7-Why is this important?


Journal 3/31/15

No, because it's all cursing half the time, and it's nothing really inspiring or important. People are just listening to Rap, because someone out there thinks it's cool, and others slowly follow, and growing attached to this nonsense.

Friday, March 27, 2015

Journal 3/27/15

I feel I'm going to do very well, I studied, took good notes, did my homework for once. (Kidding) anyways, I feel I'm going to pass

Thursday, March 26, 2015

Notes

Ethos:
Character of the person, persons identity.
Pathos:
Emotion passion.
Logos:
Logic.

Speech, Rice University.

-Everyone cheering when the president stood up. Very formal, very important, he looks happy.
-Cheering continues for a few moments
-Starts with identifying everyone
-He wants to enhance knowledge And science
-He plain out says, he wants to discover the unknown
-He starts talking about events, putting them into modern time.
-He wants the U.S to grow scientifically.
-He announces the Race to Space.
-He doesn't want to use space for warfare, he wants to use it for knowledge.
-Space is supposed to be the connection of countries.
-"We choose to go to the Moon. We choose to do these things, not because they're easy, because they're hard!" 
-"Because that challenge we intend to win."
-He speaks of the first rocket, that will take America to the moon
-He explains that space will be a new hope for America, because it can be used to protect.
-"We shall make up, and move ahead." 
-Talks about how they have 5.4 billion dollars for the budget.
-"We shall send to the moon, a giant rocket, made of new metal alloys, carrying all the equipment needed, into an unknown celestial area, and do all this, and do it right, and do it first!" 
-He believed that the U.S could do it, wishing 10 years.




Journal 3/26/15

I think, no matter what, you're drawn to someone. And when you're drawn to someone, you tend to have a lot of faith, or trust in them. Now when that trust is broken, it's like throwing that someone away, they suddenly mean less to you. You lay there heartbroken, hurt, feeling like theirs no escape from the pain. Until you try, you try to fix their wrongs, you fight, you fail, it may not leadto anything, but anything can happen, and in my opinion, anything is better than nothing..

Tuesday, March 24, 2015

Journal 3/24/15

Appeal to tradition:

The argument that one thing happens and people say "just because it's always like that" saying it's their traditions.

Argument to Antiquity:
You get more flies from honey than with vinegar. Work with people to get more production

Argument to Ingorance: 
Fear of the unknown. People denying things they haven't even tried, just because they have no clue what will happen next

Monday, March 23, 2015

Fallacies

Appeal to tradition

Argument to Antiquity

Argument to Ingorance 

Argument to sickness

Argument to popular

Argument to number

Argument to circular

Argument to Before this, because of this.

Red Herring 

Non sequitur  

Slippery slope

Straw man

Stone man

You too

Nature











Journal 3/23/15

I feel, people who are afraid to make mistakes, because they do not like to be judged. Judgement is a lot of people's fear, and to prevent their fears from happening, they keep quiet, and try their best so they can avoid the stares, and whispering behind their backs. Every single second of your life, their is at least someone out in the world, whether you personally know them or not, judging, and or thinking about you.

Friday, March 20, 2015

Journal 3/20/15

It was different, because people actually participated, they didn't just sit around like usual, they spoke, and ground was made. We need to argue more often, because no matter what, everyone will take part in it.

Thursday, March 19, 2015

Police Brutality

Mental Patient shot, for having a screwdriver in his hand.

1: Did not react in an appropriate manner, there is a way that this is justified, but they jumped to conclusion to fast.

2: Woman says he Schizophrenic and Bi polar.

3: Police did take into consideration that he was a mental patient but could have used something other than a gun.

4: The officer with the camera, is turned away, no telling if the man truly charged him.

L.A. Homeless man being shot

1: Homeless man had a gun, the cops had the right to shoot

2: A borderline between lens and sound

3: The cops were only trying to protect themselves, they as well are following orders.

4: Officer backgrounds also have a major role in the actions they take.

Notes: We need to fix either the community or law. Or even both. This kind of stuff shouldn't be happening. There are some things that are understandable. Cops need to be able to do their job and handle all cases. 

What can we use and find, that will help us better understand where the cops are coming from or the civilians are coming from?

Why don't cops take the smaller cases seriously as well?

Do we need to fix the law, or the way we raise the younger generation?

Does music effect the way people act?

Are we paying attention?







Journal 3/19/15

I think, we judge other humans, because we see ourselves in them, and we judge ourselves more than we judge anyone, and to let off some of our own steam, we feel the need to make assumptions on others.

Tuesday, March 17, 2015

PRESTONVILLE

STUDENTS OF DR. PRESTON, AS OF THIS DAY, ROOM 608 IS A CITY, OUR MASCOT IS THIS CAT:
WE SHALL RULE THE WORLD! We are unstoppable! We are only as strong as we make oursleves, and to succeed, put your trust into PRESTONVILLE!

Journal 3/17/15

How I would take over the world... Hmmm. By manipulating people's brains with cats, cats will rule the world one day! America already has a mayor that is a cat #MayorStubs! He is doing an amazing job during his term, and I'd wish our own president will one day be as good as this cat.

Monday, March 16, 2015

Exit Ticket

---SEXUALITY---

-Freedom

People have a right to love and be loved. Pursuit of happiness. Marriage should be available to everyone. While most states do allow same-sex marriage, in many you can be fired, denied service, get kicked out of college, ect. Discrimination in the workplace and at school should not be allowed. They're normal people.


-Discrimination

Religion has nothing to do with it. If people judge them, aren't they doing the job of whatever higher power they believe in? There's one passage that says "A man shall not lie with a man as he does with a woman." That does not actually mean what people think it does. It has a couple different meanings, such as a man not treating another man as he would a woman, which in that time was subservant. And, lastly, when Jesus was going around helping people, he came across a man with a slave for a lover. The man said that this slave was special, but had become sick, and Jesus was so impressed by the love and devotion from both of them that he healed the slave.

Journal 3/16/15

I think people have sides, or pick sides, because either A, they don't want to be alone, or B, they don't want to be harrassed to pick a side.

Tuesday, March 10, 2015

All this talk.

Since lately we've been talking about arguments, I thought it'd be nice to make a small example for everyone on how a instagram obsessed pre teen girl, deals with losing and argument. 

(Gibberish)
(Gibberish)
(Something about God)
(Details about argument)
(Trying to make herself look better)
(Something about her being stronger)
#Youknowwhoyouare

If you're wondering where I got inspiration for this post, check either FaceBook, Twitter, or Instagram, and browse through, we'll just about any girl at our schools profiles.

Journal 3/10/15

"Because I said so." Is not an argument, but a way out of an argument. It's used to just shut the person up, if you don't have any more reasons, and you know their kind of right, but you still want to be right, so you go straight to, "Because I said so."

Five Fallacies

argument to ignorance
argument to antiquity or tradition
argument directed at the person
argument or appeal to pity
argument or appeal to authority 

Thursday, March 5, 2015

Syllogism

A major and minor premise, with a conclusion 
Are premises true?
Validity: does conclusion follow premises?


Journal 3/5/15

I feel, the future is bright with light, but at the same time, society is going to plummet, crash, burn, and to save us, we have to learn to care, to stop being as cool as we think we are, because we're not, we are teenagers, we are not invincible, and we are not gods. Get that through your head, and do your schoolwork, get good grades, follow DP's rules, and be successful! Don't put everything in blind hope! What happens if it fails! What will you do then! You need to wake up, and get to work, the only way you'll grow stronger, and be better, is to work for the future you want.

Wednesday, March 4, 2015

Argument Notes

Adversary: An enemy

In court, the first thing attorney's say to the clients, is to stop talking to each-other.Two daughters, and one orange, cuts the orange in half. Both sad. The interest is what matters, one wants the peel, one wants the pulp. The reson why is to find out.People want to be heard. Customer service for example, it's safe to just argue because their not someone close to you, just a poor guy.Parents, teachers, bosses, there's a power imbalance, so feelings get pent up, the anger is still there, the feeling of wanting a voice is still there. Control and trust imbalance. 

Ask Questions, what can DP do to improve you.

Make yourself captain, and see what happens. HW for tomorrow.

Journal 3/4/15

Things happened, stuff changed, and I keep moving on. I live in Santa Maria now for a reason, and that stays a secret. But things did change, and now I am indefinitely different, less panicking, less arguments, more happy, and more anti social! To me, Anti Social, is a good thing, I feel better about myself, and I don't have to deal with people, other than the weird looks they give me when I finally speak.

Tuesday, March 3, 2015

Motivation

Motivation- theoretical construct, used to explain behavior, represents reasons for people's actions, desires, needs. A motive is what prompts the person to act in a certain way or at least develop an inclination for specific behavior. 

We seek pleasure and we avoid pain.

Extrinsic Motivation: outside motivation 

Intrinsic Motivation: inside motivation
 


Journal 3/3/15

Here's what I would do, I'd first, go get "just a job" then, after work, sit down, and write, I'd practice, and practice, letting my ideas flow, and let my brain work, improving with every sentence, until a masterpiece is made, and I can quit that "just a job" and earn money from doing what I love. If it doesn't work out, then I'd try again, and again, failure not being an option.

Monday, March 2, 2015

Journal 3/2/15

Jiro inspires us, by showing how dedicated people have to be, and can be to what they love. He shows us that anything is possible, that impossible is just a word, and that we should do what we love, and only strive to make it better.